Saturday, 1 June 2013

10. Lyrics Planning

Same bed but it feels just a little bit bigger now
Our song on the radio but it don't sound the same
When our friends talk about you, all it does is just tear me down
'Cause my heart breaks a little when I hear your name

I will use performance for this verse, as it will introduce my artist in the music video so the audience can see who the singer is, and what the song is about. This will look good with a close up or a medium shot of my artist.

It all just sounds like oooooh…
Mmm, too young, too dumb to realize
That I should've bought you flowers
And held your hand
Should've gave you all my hours
When I had the chance
Take you to every party
'Cause all you wanted to do was dance
Now my baby's dancing
But she's dancing with another man

I can start the narrative in this verse, and show my singer/actor looking upset and that he misses his ex-girlfriend, it will emphasise the lyric "should've gave you all my hours when I had the chance", which shows his regret

My pride, my ego, my needs, and my selfish ways
Caused a good strong woman like you to walk out my life
Now I never, never get to clean up the mess I made, ohh…
And it haunts me every time I close my eyes

I can show narrative for the lyric "haunts me every time I close my eyes", I could have an extreme close up of the artist/actor closing their eyes.

It all just sounds like oooooh…
Mmm, too young, too dumb to realize
That I should've have bought you flowers
And held your hand
Should've gave you all my hours
When I had the chance
Take you to every party
'Cause all you wanted to do was dance
Now my baby's dancing
But she's dancing with another man

This part will look good with performance, as it is the chorus so it goes back to the location where the singer is performing

Although it hurts
I'll be the first to say that I was wrong
Oh, I know I'm probably much too late
To try and apologize for my mistakes
But I just want you to know

I can use shots to show the narrative here, as the actor will be looking at an old photo frame and realises it was all his fault

I hope he buys you flowers
I hope he holds your hand
Give you all his hours
When he has the chance
Take you to every party
'Cause I remember how much you loved to dance
Do all the things I should have done
When I was your man
Do all the things I should have done
When I was your man
 
I can end the last verse with both performance and narrative. I can show the actor walking away, so the camera will pan away from him. And on the last line "when I was your man", which is the title of the song, I can end it with the artist singing the line.

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